Learning about editing articles was something I hadn't payed much attention to before.
I sat down with Gisella today and I had the time to work on my article and really edit it, making it perfect. I learned so many things about this editing process. Being ENGAGING was the first thing I learned. Since I am used to be writing for a course, such as english or humanities where everything is formally written, it is a change to be writing an article where we have to attract the audience. Also I learned to use VOCABULARY through out my articles so they would be better said and less wordy, in other words strait to the point. I never really had sat down with Gisella to edit an article, so also I learned that with a partner, you can correct things so much more and make them better because as many say "two heads think better than one."
Check out my FINAL outcome of the article from which learned so much in the process of the making!
http://www.peruthisweek.com/the-break-tips-from-blond-how-to-survive-cold-night-out-camping-100811
I sat down with Gisella today and I had the time to work on my article and really edit it, making it perfect. I learned so many things about this editing process. Being ENGAGING was the first thing I learned. Since I am used to be writing for a course, such as english or humanities where everything is formally written, it is a change to be writing an article where we have to attract the audience. Also I learned to use VOCABULARY through out my articles so they would be better said and less wordy, in other words strait to the point. I never really had sat down with Gisella to edit an article, so also I learned that with a partner, you can correct things so much more and make them better because as many say "two heads think better than one."
Check out my FINAL outcome of the article from which learned so much in the process of the making!
http://www.peruthisweek.com/the-break-tips-from-blond-how-to-survive-cold-night-out-camping-100811